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Request Review of draft-ietf-krb-wg-des-die-die-die
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-04-08
Requested 2012-03-22
Authors Love Astrand , Taylor Yu
I-D last updated 2012-04-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Christer Holmberg
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Paul E. Hoffman
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
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Document:                draft-ietf-krb-wg-des-die-die-die-04.txt

Reviewer:                 Christer Holmberg

Review Date:            2012-04-03

IETF LC End Date:    2012-04-08

IESG Telechat date: (if known) -

Summary:           The draft is ready for publication, with an editorial issue.

Major issues:     -

Minor issues:     -

Nits/editorial comments:

- Section 5, which updates the affected RFCs, is named 'Recommendations'. Would
it be better to use 'Updates to RFC XXXX' naming instead, and have a separate
section for each RFC updated?

Regards,

Christer