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Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-12-13
Requested 2011-12-12
Authors Himanshu C. Shah , Giles Heron , Vach Kompella , Eric C. Rosen
I-D last updated 2012-01-12
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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-17
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2011-09-20
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-09-22

Summary: Ready

Major issues: none

Minor issues:

Section 5.2:
     Since this
     notification does not refer to any particular message the
     Message ID and Message Type fields are set to 0.
There does not appear to be a Message Type field in the PDU.


Nits/editorial comments:

Section 5: suggest replacing the idiom "chicken and egg situation"
with "possible deadlock situation."

Section 5.2: "Section 6. below." SHOULD BE "Section 6 below."