Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-14
review-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-14-genart-lc-krishnan-2014-08-07-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-08-07 | |
Requested | 2014-07-17 | |
Authors | Himanshu C. Shah , Eric C. Rosen , François Le Faucheur , Giles Heron | |
I-D last updated | 2014-08-07 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -14
by Suresh Krishnan
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Genart Telechat review of -15 by Suresh Krishnan (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Dacheng Zhang (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Warren "Ace" Kumari (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Suresh Krishnan |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 16) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2014-08-07 |
review-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-14-genart-lc-krishnan-2014-08-07-00
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2013/10/28 IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Historic RFC, but I have some comments you may wish to address. * Section 7.1 The Length field of the IP address TLV in case the IP address is IPv6 is not defined. It should be defined to be 18 (2 bytes for address family and 16 bytes for the IPv6 address) * Address family reference The IANA registry at http://www.iana.org/assignments/address-family-numbers/address-family-numbers.xhtml is a much better reference for address families than the currently referred RFC3232 that does not contain any of the relevant information. Thanks Suresh