Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib-14
review-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib-14-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-02-20-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-02-14 | |
| Requested | 2014-01-31 | |
| Authors | Thomas Nadeau , Kiran Koushik , Rohit Mediratta | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-02-20 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -14
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Meral Shirazipour
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Genart Telechat review of -14 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Alexey Melnikov (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Sarah Banks (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed Snapshot | |
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review-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib-14-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-02-20
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| Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 15) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2014-02-20 |
review-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib-14-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-02-20-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mib-14 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-02-14 IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-14 IESG Telechat date: 2014-02-20 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some editorial comments . Nits/editorial comments: Suggestion: I noticed that Unsigned32 is used with 16 bit encoding. It could be good to mention it in the descriptions like other MIB documents do. Look for "Unsigned32 (1..65535)" in the draft. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com