Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03
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Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20140211
IETF LC End Date: 20140212
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
- the number of authors is greater than the (soft) limit
- 1 page 5: too many 'o' in 'co-oordination'
- 1.2 pages 5 & 6: IMHO you should describe more terms in the Terminology
section, e.g., UMH, RPA and even RD (as VRF is already in it)
Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr