Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03
review-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03-genart-lc-dupont-2014-02-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-12
Requested 2014-01-31
Draft last updated 2014-02-14
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Francis Dupont
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03-genart-lc-dupont-2014-02-14
Reviewed rev. 03
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-02-14

Review
review-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03-genart-lc-dupont-2014-02-14

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Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20140211
IETF LC End Date: 20140212
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - the number of authors is greater than the (soft) limit

 - 1 page 5: too many 'o' in 'co-oordination'

 - 1.2 pages 5 & 6: IMHO you should describe more terms in the Terminology
  section, e.g., UMH, RPA and even RD (as VRF is already in it)

Regards 

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr