Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03
review-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03-genart-lc-dupont-2014-02-14-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-02-12 | |
| Requested | 2014-01-31 | |
| Authors | IJsbrand Wijnands , Paul Hitchen , Nicolai Leymann , Wim Henderickx , Arkadiy Gulko , Jeff Tantsura | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-02-14 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
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Francis Dupont
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03-genart-lc-dupont-2014-02-14
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| Reviewed revision | 03 | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2014-02-14 |
review-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03-genart-lc-dupont-2014-02-14-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140211 IETF LC End Date: 20140212 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - the number of authors is greater than the (soft) limit - 1 page 5: too many 'o' in 'co-oordination' - 1.2 pages 5 & 6: IMHO you should describe more terms in the Terminology section, e.g., UMH, RPA and even RD (as VRF is already in it) Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr