Telechat Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-07
review-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2014-11-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-11-23 | |
| Requested | 2014-10-30 | |
| Authors | IJsbrand Wijnands , Eric C. Rosen , Uwe Joorde | |
| I-D last updated | 2014-11-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Shawn M Emery (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2014-11-24 |
review-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2014-11-24-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-07 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-11-24 IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-27 IESG Telechat date: 2014-11-25 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments . Minor issue: -> page [Page 8]: " - Range 0x41-0x7f: mLDP Range. Values are assigned from this range when the NLRI format associated with the route type presupposes that mLDP is the C-multicast control protocol. " Should it be should it be Range 0x43-0x7f ? since 0x40-0x42 is Reserved. Nits: -> Please see LC message as well: http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg10805.html Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com