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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lager-specification-10
review-ietf-lager-specification-10-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2016-04-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lager-specification
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-04-11
Requested 2016-03-11
Authors Kim Davies , Asmus Freytag
I-D last updated 2016-04-10
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -10 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-lager-specification by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-04-10
review-ietf-lager-specification-10-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2016-04-10-00



I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
 were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
 last call comments.



I find the document is written very clear, except a minor typo:



Section 7.1 third line: extra “.”.





Question: Can the “Match”, the “Action”, and the “Match Operators” be also used
for I2RS rules? Or IDR FlowSpec rules?





Linda