Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lager-specification-11
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Document: draft-ietf-lager-specification-11

Reviewer: Ralph Droms

Review Date: 2016-04-19

IETF LC End Date: 2016-04-11

IESG Telechat date: (if known) 2016-04-21

Summary:

 This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: While this document is long and detailed, I found it
to be clear and well-written.  I can't say I fully understand all the details
and nuances after my review, but I'm confident that an implementor could gain
the necessary understanding from careful reading of the document.  I did find
what I considered to be a couple of small typos, which I'm confident the RFC
Editor will find and correct if necessary.

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