Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-18
review-ietf-lake-edhoc-18-genart-lc-holmberg-2022-12-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lake-edhoc
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 23)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-12-31
Requested 2022-12-05
Requested by Stephen Farrell
Authors Göran Selander , John Preuß Mattsson , Francesca Palombini
I-D last updated 2022-12-20
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -20 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -18 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -18 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -18 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -18 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-lake-edhoc by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/tvJRHUSdUtXJpishMcOd0KwR4O0
Reviewed revision 18 (document currently at 23)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2022-12-20
review-ietf-lake-edhoc-18-genart-lc-holmberg-2022-12-20-00
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Document: draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-18
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 2022-12-20
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is well written, and easy to read. I do have one minor
issue that I would like the authors to address.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:

Q1: The document talks about the Initiator and Responder roles, what messages
they send etc. But I can't find a definition of what the roles. I assume the
Initiator initiates something, but unless I have missed it it would be good to
have a few word of role definitions.

Nits/editorial comments: N/A