Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lake-traces-07
review-ietf-lake-traces-07-secdir-lc-petrov-2023-09-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lake-traces
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2023-09-11
Requested 2023-08-28
Authors Göran Selander , John Preuß Mattsson , Marek Serafin , Marco Tiloca , Mališa Vučinić
I-D last updated 2024-03-20 (Latest revision 2024-01-27)
Completed reviews Intdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Ivaylo Petrov (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ivaylo Petrov
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-lake-traces by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/XNnvYa_lI8EbGWIooii9NZ3YceM
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-09-16
review-ietf-lake-traces-07-secdir-lc-petrov-2023-09-16-00
Reviewer: Ivaylo Petrov
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

I haven't verified the examples myself, but the rest looked good to
me. Thank you for writing this document! 

I agree with Roman that the provided examples need to be consistent
with I-D.ietf-lake-edhoc when that is published and this document 
should point to the resulting RFC.