Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18
review-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18-genart-lc-dunbar-2022-05-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 23)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-05-11
Requested 2022-04-27
Authors Hendrik Brockhaus , David von Oheimb , John Gray
I-D last updated 2022-05-14
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -18 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -18 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/tmyYLBLQxKjt0p-omYT9UEcdvQQ
Reviewed revision 18 (document currently at 23)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-05-14
review-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18-genart-lc-dunbar-2022-05-14-00
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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2022-05-14
IETF LC End Date: 2022-05-11
IESG Telechat date: 2022-06-02

Summary:
This document describes the changes to the Certificate Management protocol and
explains why the changes are needed. The description is very clear.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
Will the updated CMP be published as a whole? instead of requiring readers to
refer to multiple RFCs?

Thanks, Linda Dunbar