IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-04
review-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-04-genart-lc-bryant-2025-06-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2025-06-05
Requested 2025-05-22
Authors Ben S , Adam R , Daniel Van Geest
I-D last updated 2025-07-10 (Latest revision 2025-06-08)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Chris M. Lonvick (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/T-FDbC6SU_JJwkR_dju7C28Rb2A
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2025-06-03
review-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-04-genart-lc-bryant-2025-06-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-04
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2025-06-03
IETF LC End Date: 2025-06-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:A well written document with just one editorial comment concerning
non-ascii characters in the text version.

I did not check the technical details in appendix A or appendix B

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:

The text contains non-ascii characters something that NITS calls out. I am not
sure if policy has changed but I did not think that non-ASCII was permitted in
the text version of an RFC.