Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-sphincs-plus-17
review-ietf-lamps-cms-sphincs-plus-17-genart-lc-gurbani-2024-12-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-sphincs-plus
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-12-16
Requested 2024-12-02
Authors Russ Housley , Scott Fluhrer , Panos Kampanakis , Bas Westerbaan
I-D last updated 2024-12-26
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -17 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-cms-sphincs-plus by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/C89V8R-4VxKyrz2zLx6ePEgX198
Reviewed revision 17 (document currently at 19)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-12-26
review-ietf-lamps-cms-sphincs-plus-17-genart-lc-gurbani-2024-12-26-00
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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cms-sphincs-plus-??
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2024-12-26
IETF LC End Date: 2024-12-16
IESG Telechat date: 2025-01-09

Summary: The I-D is ready to be published as a Standards Track Document.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 1

Nits:
- Section 2, second paragraph: s/we reach the top subtree./the top subtree is encountered./
  (Reason: removing the use of colloquial "we" in a standards document.)