Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-05
review-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-05-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-01-30
Requested 2017-01-16
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Adam Montville (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Adam Montville (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Stewart Bryant
Review review-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-05-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-28
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/UCRGQNS32DjviHcdg2aKbYyunH8
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2017-01-28
Review completed: 2017-01-28

Review
review-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-05-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-28

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-05.txt
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant	
Review Date: 28 January 2017
IETF LC End Date: 30 January 2017
IESG Telechat date: not yet known

Summary: A well written document ready for publication with two minor nits

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: Nits throws up three warnings. The downref
to RFC5912 warning can be ignored as RFC5912 as its is already in the
downref registry. The reference warning is spurious. That just leaves
two over 72 char lines to be fixed.