Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-05
review-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-05-secdir-lc-montville-2017-01-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 18) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2017-01-30 | |
| Requested | 2017-01-16 | |
| Authors | Alexey Melnikov , Wei Chuang | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-12-19 (Latest revision 2018-03-04) | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05
by Adam W. Montville
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Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Stewart Bryant (diff) Genart Telechat review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff) Genart Telechat review of -08 by Stewart Bryant (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Ron Bonica (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Adam W. Montville (diff) Genart IETF Last Call review of -15 by Stewart Bryant (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Adam W. Montville |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 18) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2017-01-26 |
review-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-05-secdir-lc-montville-2017-01-26-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This document is ready with nits. In Security Considerations, I recommend: s/but further/but is further/. Then, I would change the second to last sentence in Security Considerations as follows: This complication, as mentioned in Section 4.4 of [RFC5890] and in Section 4 of [RFC6532], is that use of Unicode introduces the risk of visually similar characters which can be exploited to deceive the recipient. Kind regards, Adam