Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update-06
review-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update-06-artart-telechat-fenton-2024-05-03-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | ART Area Review Team (artart) | |
| Deadline | 2024-05-14 | |
| Requested | 2024-04-24 | |
| Authors | himanshu sharma | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-05-03 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -04
by Joseph A. Salowey
(diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -07 by Joseph A. Salowey (diff) Artart Telechat review of -06 by Jim Fenton (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Susan Hares (diff) Artart Last Call review of -04 by Jim Fenton (diff) Genart Last Call review of -05 by Ines Robles (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jim Fenton |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update by ART Area Review Team Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/N5K3jwJ-R-ePxTOUOEaeU3rjPEE | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 11) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2024-05-03 |
review-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-update-06-artart-telechat-fenton-2024-05-03-00
I am the designated ARTART reviewer for this draft. This is a re-review of -06 following my review of -04. Status: Ready with Nits Thanks for addressing basically all of my comments from my earlier review. This is ready to go, although I spotted a few more instances of the overuse of "octets" in Section 2.1 that result in some awkward wording. Examples and suggested replacements: "...while the extnValue is the encoded value of Nonce octets" -> "...while the extnValue is the encoded value of the nonce" "...then the length of the Nonce octets MUST be..." -> "...then the length of the nonce MUST be..." "...MUST use a minimum length of 32 octets for Nonce octets in the Nonce extension." -> "...MUST use a minimum length of 32 octets for the nonce in the nonce extension." "...that has a Nonce octets with a length..." -> "...that has a nonce with a length..." "The value of the Nonce octets MUST be..." -> "The value of the nonce MUST be..." "