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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08
review-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08-opsdir-lc-zhou-2019-04-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-04-10
Requested 2019-03-27
Authors Panos Kampanakis , Quynh Dang
I-D last updated 2019-04-09
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 15)
Result Has issues
Completed 2019-04-09
review-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08-opsdir-lc-zhou-2019-04-09-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Document reviewed: draft-ietf-lamps-pkix-shake-08
Intended Status:  Standards Track

Summary:
In general, this document is clear to me. I did not see any special operational
or network management related issue. It's almost ready to be published. There
are some issues and nits.

Issues:
The normative and informative reference in this draft are not clear to me.
I think that [RFC8017](Informational) and [RFC8174](BCP) should not be
normative reference. And why some standard tack RFC are listed in informative
reference?

Editorial:
line 102: redundand -> redundant
line 126,129: Deterministric -> Deterministic
line 314: algorithsm -> algorithms
line 378: subtitutions -> substitutions
line 763,777: Determinstic -> Deterministic