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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06
review-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06-artart-lc-peng-2022-10-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2022-10-28
Requested 2022-10-14
Authors Stefan Santesson , Russ Housley , Trevor Freeman , Leonard Rosenthol
I-D last updated 2022-10-28
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -06 by Shuping Peng (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -07 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -07 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Shuping Peng
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/8siu5xkhxN6Y2quxSVkBPoyD4-Y
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-10-28
review-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06-artart-lc-peng-2022-10-28-00
I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft.

Summary:

This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be
considered prior to publication.

Nits:

Section 3
Page 7
s/server operators that provides/server operators that provide

Page 8
s/each image objects/each image object

Section 4.1
Page 12
s/is outside the scope of this document/are outside the scope of this document.

Section 7
Page 18
s/many commons image formats/many common image formats

s/The table also indicates the support
   requirements these image formats.
  /The table also indicates the support
   requirements of these image formats.

Section 9
Page 20
s/not the of binary format if
  the image or audio.
 /not the binary format of
  the image or audio.