Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05
review-ietf-lamps-samples-05-genart-lc-bryant-2021-11-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-samples
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-11-26
Requested 2021-11-05
Authors Daniel Kahn Gillmor
I-D last updated 2021-11-16
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Derrell Piper (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-samples by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/mflhoJqZWKiXwKjyiy2xzxTsVj4
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-11-16
review-ietf-lamps-samples-05-genart-lc-bryant-2021-11-16-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2021-11-16
IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-26
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written document ready for publication

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
The following terms were used without prior definition in the text: PEM, OCSP,
CRL - they are well known in the security community, but not in the RFC Editor
list of well known terms not needing expansion on first use.

Sections 11 and 12 have no content and can be removed.