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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-09

Request Review of draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-10-24
Requested 2017-10-11
Authors Deepak Kumar , Zitao Wang , Qin Wu , Reshad Rahman , Srihari Raghavan
Draft last updated 2017-10-13
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -03 by Carl Moberg (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -10 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -11 by Benjamin Kaduk (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian E. Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-09-genart-telechat-carpenter-2017-10-13
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready with Issues
Completed 2017-10-13
Gen-ART *Last Call* review of draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-09

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Document: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-09.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2017-10-14
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-25
IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26

Summary: Ready with issues


The shepherd says:

> This includes at least two different implementations of
> the model, as well as product and demos at Bits-n-Bytes.

Shouldn't WGs make routine use of BCP 205, RFC 7942 "Improving
Awareness of Running Code: The Implementation Status Section"?

Minor Issues:

In the following:

         |  +--ro min-delay-value?         uint32
         |  +--ro max-delay-value?         uint32
         |  +--ro average-delay-value?     uint32
         +--ro session-jitter-statistics
         |  +--ro time-resolution-value?   identityref
         |  +--ro min-jitter-value?        uint32
         |  +--ro max-jitter-value?        uint32
         |  +--ro average-jitter-value?    uint32

what are the units for the delay-value and jitter-value
elements, and what definition of 'jitter' is intended?

  identity protocol-id-internet {
    base protocol-id;
      "Internet Protocols.";

It isn't clear what "Internet Protocols" means. It seems totally non-specific.


  identity protocol-id-propreitary {
    base protocol-id;
      "Propreitary protocol (eg.,IP SLA).";