Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-10
review-ietf-lisp-introduction-10-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-02-13-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lisp-introduction |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-03-03 | |
Requested | 2015-01-22 | |
Authors | Albert Cabellos-Aparicio , Damien Saucez | |
I-D last updated | 2015-02-13 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -10
by Alexey Melnikov
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Genart Telechat review of -12 by Alexey Melnikov (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Radia Perlman (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by David L. Black (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Alexey Melnikov |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-lisp-introduction by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 15) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2015-02-13 |
review-ietf-lisp-introduction-10-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-02-13-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-11 Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 2015-02-11 IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-04 IESG Telechat date: 2015-03-05 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Thank you for writing this document, I quite enjoyed reading it. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In A.1: >LISP, as initially conceived, had a number of potential operating modes, named ’models’. Although they are note Typo: not >used anymore, one occasionally sees mention of them, so they are briefly described here.