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Request Review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-03-03
Requested 2015-01-31
Authors Albert Cabellos-Aparicio , Damien Saucez
I-D last updated 2015-02-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by David L. Black (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David L. Black
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-lisp-introduction by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-02-17
review-ietf-lisp-introduction-10-opsdir-lc-black-2015-02-17-00

Hi Albert,



>

We have posted an updated version of draft-lisp-introduction hopefully
addressing all the comments besides UDP Zero.



I’ve scanned the diff wrt the -11 version, and it does look like all the
comments have been addressed besides the one on UDP zero checksums for IPv6. 
I’m going to walk
 away from that comment, as there is some rationale for that design decision in
 the existing draft text, and moreover, the primary responsibility for that
 explanation falls on the LISP protocol RFCs that have already been approved by
 the IESG.



Hence, I think this -12 version of the introduction draft is good to go. Thank
you to you and the other authors for addressing the comments in a thorough
fashion and for
 doing so even though they arrived after the conclusion of IETF Last Call on
 this draft.



Regards,

--David



From:

 Albert Cabellos [mailto:albert.cabellos at gmail.com]

Sent:

 Tuesday, February 17, 2015 7:28 PM

To:

 ops-dir at ietf.org; Black, David; lisp at ietf.org

Cc:

 Damien Saucez; Luigi Iannone; Joel Halpern; Brian Haberman

Subject:

 Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt



Hi all



We have posted an updated version of draft-lisp-introduction hopefully
addressing all the comments besides UDP Zero.



Please let us know if this is not the case.



Kind Regards



Albert



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From: <

internet-drafts at ietf.org

>

Date: Wed, Feb 18, 2015 at 1:17 AM

Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt

To: Damien Saucez <

damien.saucez at inria.fr

>, Albert Cabellos-Aparicio <

acabello at ac.upc.edu

>

A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt

has been successfully submitted by Albert Cabellos and posted to the

IETF repository.

Name:           draft-ietf-lisp-introduction

Revision:       12

Title:          An Architectural Introduction to the Locator/ID Separation
Protocol (LISP)

Document date:  2015-02-17

Group:          lisp

Pages:          28

URL:

http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt

Status:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction/

Htmlized:

http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12

Diff:

http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12

Abstract:

   This document describes the architecture of the Locator/ID Separation

   Protocol (LISP), making it easier to read the rest of the LISP

   specifications and providing a basis for discussion about the details

   of the LISP protocols.  This document is used for introductory

   purposes, more details can be found in RFC6830, the protocol

   specification.

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