Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12
review-ietf-lisp-introduction-12-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lisp-introduction |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-03-03 | |
| Requested | 2015-02-12 | |
| Authors | Albert Cabellos-Aparicio , Damien Saucez | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-04-08 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -10
by
Alexey Melnikov
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Alexey Melnikov (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Radia Perlman (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by David L. Black (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Alexey Melnikov |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-lisp-introduction-12-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08
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| Reviewed revision | 12 (document currently at 15) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2015-04-08 |
review-ietf-lisp-introduction-12-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-11
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2015-02-11
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-04
IESG Telechat date: 2015-03-05
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational
RFC.
Thank you for writing this document, I quite enjoyed reading it.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
In A.1:
>LISP, as initially conceived, had a number of potential operating
modes, named ’models’. Although they are note
Typo: not
>used anymore, one
occasionally sees mention of them, so they are briefly described
here.