Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lisp-mib-08
review-ietf-lisp-mib-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-17-00

Resending, now expanding some addresses that were giving trouble.

On 15/01/2013 15:44, Miguel A. Garcia wrote:



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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-mib-08
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2013-01-15
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-21
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: The document is ready for publication as an experimental RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

- I have not reviewed Section 7, because I won't be able to make
technical comments, and it is quite extensive.

- The IANA considerations section could be slightly clear. It should
contain the request to IANA to allocate a value to the lispMib object
identifier, rather than be hidden in an Editor's note that is to be
removed prior to publication. Additionally, it is not clear which
subregistry IANA has to use to allocate a value. The draft refers to the
"mib-2", but I guess the formal name of the subregistry is "SMI Network
Management MGMT Codes". This subregistry should be explicitly named.
Furthermore, the registration is missing how IANA should populate the
"Name" and "Description" of the entry that IANA should give to this MIB.

/Miguel




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