Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lisp-mib-08
review-ietf-lisp-mib-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lisp-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-21
Requested 2013-01-10
Authors Gregg Schudel, Amit Jain, Victor Moreno
Draft last updated 2013-01-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Miguel García (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Miguel García
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lisp-mib-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-17
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-01-17

Review
review-ietf-lisp-mib-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-17

Resending, now expanding some addresses that were giving trouble.

On 15/01/2013 15:44, Miguel A. Garcia wrote:



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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-lisp-mib-08
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2013-01-15
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-21
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: The document is ready for publication as an experimental RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

- I have not reviewed Section 7, because I won't be able to make
technical comments, and it is quite extensive.

- The IANA considerations section could be slightly clear. It should
contain the request to IANA to allocate a value to the lispMib object
identifier, rather than be hidden in an Editor's note that is to be
removed prior to publication. Additionally, it is not clear which
subregistry IANA has to use to allocate a value. The draft refers to the
"mib-2", but I guess the formal name of the subregistry is "SMI Network
Management MGMT Codes". This subregistry should be explicitly named.
Furthermore, the registration is missing how IANA should populate the
"Name" and "Description" of the entry that IANA should give to this MIB.

/Miguel




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