Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lisp-mib-11
review-ietf-lisp-mib-11-genart-telechat-krishnan-2013-08-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lisp-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-07-09
Requested 2013-06-20
Authors Gregg Schudel, Amit Jain, Victor Moreno
Draft last updated 2013-08-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Miguel GarcĂ­a (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lisp-mib-11-genart-telechat-krishnan-2013-08-12
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-08-12

Review
review-ietf-lisp-mib-11-genart-telechat-krishnan-2013-08-12

Hi Jari,
  I went through the draft and it looks OK. I just had one minor issue
with some example math in the draft.

The following math in the Example 3 of lispMapCacheEntry is wrong and
needs to get fixed.

11 - (2 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 4) = 1

I don't think that this should hold the draft up as it is only an
example, but it certainly did throw me off when I read it.

Thanks
Suresh

On 07/10/2013 05:23 PM, Jari Arkko wrote:
> Miguel,
> 
> This draft is finally in IESG plate after you had reviewed it in January. Thank you for the review! I'm planning to ballot a No-Objection. I also noticed that for the IESG review it had been reassigned to Suresh. Suresh, any objections - have you reviewed this version?
> 
> Jari
>