Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07
review-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07-genart-lc-even-2018-02-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-27
Requested 2018-02-13
Authors Victor Moreno , Dino Farinacci
I-D last updated 2018-05-02 (Latest revision 2018-03-09)
Completed reviews Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Les Ginsberg (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2018-02-26
review-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07-genart-lc-even-2018-02-26-00
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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-02-26
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-27
IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as experimental RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. in section 1 "The signal-free mechanism here proposed " should be "The
signal-free mechanism proposed here " 2.  in section 2 SSM is Source Specific
Multicast not single source 3. in section 7 bullet 5 "When the the ITR..."