Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-10
review-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-10-rtgdir-lc-dhody-2022-04-26-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
Deadline | 2022-04-12 | |
Requested | 2022-03-29 | |
Requested by | Alvaro Retana | |
Authors | Alberto Rodriguez-Natal , Vina Ermagan , Anton Smirnov , Vrushali Ashtaputre , Dino Farinacci | |
I-D last updated | 2022-04-26 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -10
by Dhruv Dhody
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Tero Kivinen (diff) Genart Last Call review of -09 by Christer Holmberg (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Dhruv Dhody |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf by Routing Area Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/dyyZftoyWWdigRMJlhkcjbGz7oM | |
Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 12) | |
Result | Has issues | |
Completed | 2022-04-26 |
review-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-10-rtgdir-lc-dhody-2022-04-26-00
I was assigned the reviewer today. I noticed that the IESG ballot is done and the document is approved, I am not sure how valuable this review would be but anyways... Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review Date: 2022-04-26 IETF LC End Date: Over Intended Status: Experimental Summary: I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved before publication. Comments: - The document is simple, clear and straightforward. Major Issues: - No major issues found. Minor Issues: - Is there any padding requirement that should be mentioned for the Internal format in alignment with the rest of LISP? - Consider if adding an example in the appendix would be useful for a casual reader. Nits: - LISP does not have a * next to it at https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt and thus should be expanded on first use! Thanks! Dhruv