Early Review of draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07
review-ietf-lpwan-overview-07-intdir-early-halley-2017-12-01-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lpwan-overview |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
| Deadline | 2017-12-01 | |
| Requested | 2017-11-11 | |
| Requested by | Suresh Krishnan | |
| Authors | Stephen Farrell | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-12-01 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -07
by Bob Halley
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Iotdir Early review of -08 by Samita Chakrabarti (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Paul Wouters (diff) Rtgdir Telechat review of -07 by Andrew G. Malis (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Bob Halley |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-ietf-lpwan-overview by Internet Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2017-12-01 |
review-ietf-lpwan-overview-07-intdir-early-halley-2017-12-01-00
I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html. The document is a good introduction to this area! I did not find anything that needed correction or clarification. /Bob