Early Review of draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07
review-ietf-lpwan-overview-07-intdir-early-halley-2017-12-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lpwan-overview
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2017-12-01
Requested 2017-11-11
Requested by Suresh Krishnan
Authors Stephen Farrell
Draft last updated 2017-12-01
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -07 by Bob Halley (diff)
Iotdir Early review of -08 by Samita Chakrabarti (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -07 by Andrew Malis (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bob Halley
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lpwan-overview-07-intdir-early-halley-2017-12-01
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-12-01

Review
review-ietf-lpwan-overview-07-intdir-early-halley-2017-12-01

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html.

The document is a good introduction to this area!  I did not find anything that needed correction or clarification.

/Bob