Early Review of draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07
review-ietf-lpwan-overview-07-intdir-early-halley-2017-12-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lpwan-overview
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2017-12-01
Requested 2017-11-11
Requested by Suresh Krishnan
Other Reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -07 by Andrew Malis
Review State Completed
Reviewer Bob Halley
Review review-ietf-lpwan-overview-07-intdir-early-halley-2017-12-01
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/DeASJ93KQ2cGKx3_50V5mERoK9w
Reviewed rev. 07
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-12-01
Review completed: 2017-12-01

Review
review-ietf-lpwan-overview-07-intdir-early-halley-2017-12-01

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html.

The document is a good introduction to this area!  I did not find anything that needed correction or clarification.

/Bob