Early Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-00
review-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-00-rtgdir-early-bhatia-2018-12-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2018-12-07
Requested 2018-11-13
Requested by Acee Lindem
Draft last updated 2018-12-08
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -00 by Manav Bhatia (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -03 by Manav Bhatia (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Manav Bhatia
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-00-rtgdir-early-bhatia-2018-12-08
Reviewed rev. 00 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-12-08

Review
review-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-00-rtgdir-early-bhatia-2018-12-08

Hi,



I have done a routing directorate review of this draft.



https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis/



The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes
on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to
the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please
see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir



Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last
Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
discussion or by updating the draft.



Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis

Reviewer: Manav Bhatia

Review Date: 7 Dec 2018

Intended Status: Proposed Standard



Summary:

No issues found. This document is ready for publication.



Comments:

I have a minor comment on whether the authors could add some text that
explains that the current mechanism only works when the restarting router
comes up in a short amount of time, which is basically for as long as the
Holdtimer does not expire on its neighbors. However, some restarts can take
longer, and this adds support for such restarts.



Thanks, Manav