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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions-14
review-ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions-14-secdir-lc-sheffer-2021-05-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2021-05-07
Requested 2021-04-22
Authors Peter Psenak , Clarence Filsfils , Ahmed Bashandy , Bruno Decraene , Zhibo Hu
I-D last updated 2021-05-03
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Yaron Sheffer
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/gskBxhXy2_Kiyeg-bNqK4X1Liic
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 19)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-05-03
review-ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions-14-secdir-lc-sheffer-2021-05-03-00
This document specifies extensions (TLVs, sub-TLVs etc.) to IS-IS in support of
Segment Routing on IPv6.

The document states that the security considerations are a union of security
considerations from a bunch of predecessor document. This seems reasonable to
me.

Details:

* The first sentence of the Abstract is missing a word, perhaps "architecture".

* Introduction: typo: "This documents".

* Capabilities: to allow for future extensibility, you should probably add
"Implementations receiving this TLV MUST ignore any other bits that may be set
in the Flags field".