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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-06
review-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-06-opsdir-telechat-li-2025-03-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2025-03-24
Requested 2025-03-09
Requested by Mohamed Boucadair
Authors Ran Chen , Detao Zhao , Peter Psenak , Ketan Talaulikar , Liyan Gong
I-D last updated 2025-05-23 (Latest revision 2025-04-08)
Completed reviews Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -03 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Mike Ounsworth (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Tony Li (diff)
Comments
Please focus on the ops implications, clarity/lack/need of deployment/deployability, and management considerations. Thank you.
Assignment Reviewer Tony Li
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/zm9JOBOsQygcNtWuhCa_mYnirxU
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 07)
Result Has nits
Completed 2025-03-25
review-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags-06-opsdir-telechat-li-2025-03-25-00
OPSDIR Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-extended-flags

Reviewer: Tony Li
Status: Has Nits

Overall: Ready, but with a few nits.

Details:

Section 2:

1)

OLD:
	This contains a variable number of 32-bit flags.

NEW:
	This contains a variable number of flags, grouped in 4-octet
	blocks.

Flags, by definition, are a single bit.

2) You write:

   If any trailing 32-bit block(s) are
   received without any bit being set in it, then the LSA MUST be
   considered malformed.

This seems unnecessarily restrictive. Please consider dropping
it. Postel's Law says that it should be accepted as it is semantically
clear. Operationally, this will improve interoperability.

Section 5.1.1:

OLD:
	*  Bit number (counting from bit 0 as the most significant
	bit)

NEW:
	*  Bit number (counting from bit 0 as the most significant bit
	of the first block)

There is no specification of which way the blocks of bits are ordered
within the TLV.  This is a subtle hint that we are consistently being
big-endian. If you would like to be less subtle, I would also suggest
explicit wording in section 2. Repeat this change in section 5.2.1 as
well.