Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-09
review-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-09-intdir-telechat-von-hugo-2023-07-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2023-05-19
Requested 2023-05-03
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Mike Fox , Acee Lindem , Alvaro Retana
I-D last updated 2023-07-14
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Gyan Mishra (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -09 by Dirk Von Hugo
Rtgdir Last Call review of -03 by Susan Hares (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dirk Von Hugo
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/NJ5S23ULfqkuDqnhcTij9031zVs
Reviewed revision 09
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-07-14
review-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-09-intdir-telechat-von-hugo-2023-07-14-00
the document updates LSR/OSPF documents to inclusive language replacing
Master/Slave by Leader/Follower terminology. No technical errors or need for
further clarification were found. Only two very minor nits have been detected:
Page 4: Section 2.4.,first => Section 2.4., first Page 5:  OSPPFv3 Router-LSAs
=>  OSPFv3 Router-LSAs

Thanks for the work to authors and other reviewers!
Best regards
Dirk