Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lwig-ikev2-minimal-03
review-ietf-lwig-ikev2-minimal-03-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2015-10-09-00

All,

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Version Reviewed: draft-ietf-lwig-ikev2-minimal-04

Summary:  Ready with minor nits

This is a Last Call/Special Request so I performed this with some haste.


I am not going to say I was able to spend the time I wish to spend 


walking through the implementation details, and I hope the Document 


Shepherd has performed a more through read.





1.  Introduction

   NAT Traversal, IKE SA rekey, Child SA Rekey, Multiple Child SAs,

issue: There should be some standard way of the 'rekey' phrase -
either 'rekey' or 'Rekey'.

   This document is inteded to be stand-alone, meaning everything needed

typo: intended

1.1 Use Cases

   always initiated from that sleeping node when they wale up and after

typo: 'wake up'

References:

I-D.ietf-ipsecme-oob-pubkey - references but is a dead Working Group
document.  Should reference draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-12, which is
in IESG review currently.

A.5.  Identification Payloads

question: It's the only Payload which is plural, while the others are all
singular. It may be a minor nit, but it looks like it's one Payload.