Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11
review-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11-iotdir-telechat-robles-2020-10-20-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Internet of Things Directorate (iotdir) | |
| Deadline | 2020-10-20 | |
| Requested | 2020-10-09 | |
| Requested by | Éric Vyncke | |
| Authors | Carles Gomez , Jon Crowcroft , Michael Scharf | |
| I-D last updated | 2020-10-20 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -10
by Linda Dunbar
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Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Bernie Volz (diff) Iotdir Telechat review of -11 by Ines Robles (diff) Tsvart Telechat review of -11 by Mirja Kühlewind (diff) |
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| Comments |
I would appreciate a review on this 30-page document keeping in mind the specific of IoT but also the full (if possible) compliance to TCP/IP. Thank you, -éric |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Ines Robles |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks by Internet of Things Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/iot-directorate/vKP5b_jsrfi2ndZxHYZGNvD6w6I | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2020-10-20 |
review-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11-iotdir-telechat-robles-2020-10-20-00
Document: draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11 Reviewer: Ines Robles Review Date: 2020-10-20 Summary: This document provides guidance on how to implement and use the Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) in Constrained-Node Networks (CNNs), which are a characterstic of the Internet of Things (IoT). The document is clear to understand. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None. Nits: 1- Should section 2 "Conventions used in this document" be removed? I have not found Normative language into the document 2- Questions: Following my understanding, the transport features provided by TCP [RFC 8095 - Section 3.1.3] are covered in this document, right? or there some of the mentioned features that does not apply to CNN? Thank you for this document, Ines