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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet of Things Directorate (iotdir)
Deadline 2020-10-20
Requested 2020-10-09
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Carles Gomez , Jon Crowcroft , Michael Scharf
Draft last updated 2020-10-20
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Bernie Volz (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -11 by Ines Robles (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -11 by Mirja Kühlewind (diff)
I would appreciate a review on this 30-page document keeping in mind the specific of IoT but also the full (if possible) compliance to TCP/IP.
Thank you,
Assignment Reviewer Ines Robles
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11-iotdir-telechat-robles-2020-10-20
Posted at
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2020-10-20
Document: draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2020-10-20


This document provides guidance on how to implement and use the Transmission
Control Protocol (TCP) in Constrained-Node Networks  (CNNs), which are a
characterstic of the Internet of Things (IoT).

The document is clear to understand.

Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: None.

1- Should section 2 "Conventions used in this document" be removed? I have not
found Normative language into the document 2- Questions: Following my
understanding, the transport features provided by TCP [RFC 8095 - Section
3.1.3] are covered in this document, right? or there some of the mentioned
features that does not apply to CNN?

Thank you for this document,