Last Call Review of draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-13
review-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-13-artart-lc-amsuess-2024-07-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2024-07-01
Requested 2024-06-17
Authors Juan-Carlos Zúñiga , Carlos J. Bernardos , Amelia Andersdotter
I-D last updated 2024-07-02
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -13 by Christian Amsüss (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christian Amsüss
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/c7wR6y7V5yVxvGzhld_fuckYgNg
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-07-02
review-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-13-artart-lc-amsuess-2024-07-02-00
The document does what it says in the title: It describes the state of affairs
– assembling data from various organizations along with own observations, and
creating the context around them.

As such, the document does not touch on typical ART area issues.

There is just a single editorial note I have: The fing.com URL is not a link,
presumably because it was not a Cool URI and is now 404. That oddity might be
less intrusive if the link were converted into an informative reference, where
in the bibliography both the original URI and the latest wayback machine's
snapshot[1] are given.

[1]:
https://web.archive.org/web/20230905111429/https://www.fing.com/news/private-mac-address-on-ios-14