Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-25
review-ietf-manet-dlep-25-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2016-12-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 29)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-11-28
Requested 2016-11-08
Authors Stan Ratliff , Shawn Jury , Darryl Satterwhite , Rick Taylor , Bo Berry
I-D last updated 2016-12-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -25 by Matthew A. Miller (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -25 by Paul E. Hoffman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -25 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -13 by Lou Berger (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -25 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-manet-dlep-25-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2016-12-12
Reviewed revision 25 (document currently at 29)
Result Has Issues
Completed 2016-12-12
review-ietf-manet-dlep-25-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2016-12-12-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area
directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

My puzzle of this document is how and where the DLEP can be deployed.

Your Figure 1 assumes that IEEE802.11 is among the Modem Devices. That means
the Modem Devices are IEEE802.11 compliant (say IEEE802.11s compliant).

I think IEEE802.11 already has solution between Router and Access Points. Why
need another routing protocol? Besides, how many “Modems” are attached to one
router?

Linda Dunbar

Huawei USA IP Technology Lab

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Plano, TX 75024

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