Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-05
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Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-07-09
Requested 2024-06-25
Authors David Wiggins , Lou Berger , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd
I-D last updated 2026-01-31 (Latest revision 2025-03-24)
Completed reviews Tsvart Early review of -02 by David L. Black (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by He Jia (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -08 by Carlos J. Bernardos (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Behcet Sarikaya
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Completed 2024-07-04
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Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-05
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2024-07-04
IETF LC End Date: 2024-07-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This document is part of a cluster of four which together specify a
  credit-base flow control extension to DLEP. It just defines the extension
  type value, as such light in content.
The document is well written and easy to read.
DLEP seems to be popular protocol especially these days and there is an open
source implementation developed in MIT. The protocol is used inside home
routers which provide WiFi access at home allowing the use of many IEEE 802.11
frequencies of 2.4, 5 and more recently 6 GHz.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
I could only find one nit:

PCP acronym is used but it was not spelled out as Priority Code Points in
Section 2.