Telechat Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08
review-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08-intdir-telechat-bernardos-2025-02-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2025-02-04
Requested 2025-01-30
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors David Wiggins , Lou Berger , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd
I-D last updated 2026-01-31 (Latest revision 2025-03-24)
Completed reviews Tsvart Early review of -02 by David L. Black (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by He Jia (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -08 by Carlos J. Bernardos (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos J. Bernardos
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/jDZMCHc3U6wPYBWPIIJc7TeODhI
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2025-02-04
review-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08-intdir-telechat-bernardos-2025-02-04-00
I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. These comments were written
primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and
shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments
from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last
Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

The document is well written and I have not found any INTAREA related issues.

Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as NO
OBJECTION.

The following are minor issues (typos, misspelling, minor text improvements)
with the document:

- “Virtual Area Netwokrs” —> “Virtual Area Networks”.
- “both modens and routers” —> “both modems and routers”.
- “Routers may have limits” —> is this “may” intended to be lowercase or should
it be uppercase? (just checking to be sure). Similar question with “queues
might not be supported”.

Thanks for writing this document.

Carlos