Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04
review-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04-genart-lc-bryant-2019-06-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-07-08
Requested 2019-06-21
Authors Bow-Nan Cheng, Lou Berger
Draft last updated 2019-06-26
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Leif Johansson (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Review review-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04-genart-lc-bryant-2019-06-26
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ekyxvlu-1W4nS8LfprQuRl-1nvk
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-06-26

Review
review-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04-genart-lc-bryant-2019-06-26

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Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-06-26
IETF LC End Date: 2019-07-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A very simple well written document ready for publication except for one nit and one question.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues:

      A 64-bit unsigned integer, representing the longest transmission
      delay, in microseconds, that a packet encounters as it is
      transmitted over the link.

SB> That is a range 0..58000 years. I wonder if it would have been
SB> useful to have used ns at a cost of limiting the range to
SB> only 0..58 years?

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Nits/editorial comments:

                      DLEP Latency Range Extension
               draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04

Abstract

   This document defines an extension to the DLEP protocol to provide
   the range of latency that may be experienced on a link.

SB> I am not sure what the policy WRT to RFC titles is, but DLEP is
SB> not well known and should be expanded in the abstract.
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