Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04
review-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04-tsvart-lc-scharf-2019-07-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2019-07-08
Requested 2019-06-21
Authors Bow-Nan Cheng, Lou Berger
Draft last updated 2019-07-01
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Leif Johansson (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Michael Scharf
State Completed
Review review-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04-tsvart-lc-scharf-2019-07-01
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/Fl0egS9_tDf_VMdib3qri1SgSEk
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-07-01

Review
review-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04-tsvart-lc-scharf-2019-07-01

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
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This is a short and straightforward document without any apparent impact on transport protocols.

As a purely editorial nit, I'd suggest expanding the acronym DLEP in the abstract.