Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05
review-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05-genart-lc-bryant-2019-08-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-08-15
Requested 2019-08-01
Authors Rick Taylor, Stan Ratliff
Draft last updated 2019-08-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Nancy Cam-Winget (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Review review-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05-genart-lc-bryant-2019-08-06
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/KfoecpkY7narhQJqZ_WLMtX_NdU
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-08-06

Review
review-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05-genart-lc-bryant-2019-08-06

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Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-08-06
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written document with a few nits that should be looked at.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

" The Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol (DLEP) [RFC8175] describes a"

Nits says that the "[]" brackets should be removed

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  " None of the features introduced by this extension require extra
   consideration by an implementation."

I think that should be 

   "None of the features introduced by this extension require extra
   security consideration by an implementation."

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"Assign a new DLEP Extensions Registry value (TBD1) from the"

I think that should be 

"Assign a new DLEP Extensions Type Values Registry value (TBD1) from the"

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