Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-05

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2019-04-05
Requested 2019-03-13
Requested by Alvaro Retana
Authors Bow-Nan Cheng, David Wiggins, Lou Berger
Draft last updated 2019-03-29
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -05 by Andy Smith (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Dale Worley (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Bob Briscoe (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Andy Smith 
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-05-rtgdir-lc-smith-2019-03-29
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-03-29



I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ‚Äč

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension
Reviewer: Andy Smith 
Review Date: 29 March 2019

This document is well written and easy to understand.  I see no reason it cannot be published.

This document is well written and easy to understand.  I see no reason it cannot be published.

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It might be helpful to expand the acronym "TBA" in the requested Data Item Type field.