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Early Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-radio-quality-01
review-ietf-manet-dlep-radio-quality-01-rtgdir-early-white-2025-05-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-radio-quality
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2025-05-01
Requested 2025-04-09
Requested by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd
Authors Henning Rogge
I-D last updated 2026-02-26 (Latest revision 2025-10-20)
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Russ White (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ White
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-manet-dlep-radio-quality by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/Cs_F34YnaWLUy_xF1B8zbqTUUGE
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 03)
Result Has nits
Completed 2025-05-03
review-ietf-manet-dlep-radio-quality-01-rtgdir-early-white-2025-05-03-00
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nit --

All Data Items available in this extension provide access to the
   radios physical layer measurements

radios/radio's

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nit --

Radio Biterror Rate Data Item is a mandatory TLV that contains
   information about the radio receivers estimate how often a
   transmitted bit will be received wrong.

Maybe:

Radio Biterror Rate Data Item is a mandatory TLV containing the receiver's
estimate of bits incorrectly modified in transmission.

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question --

The rate here is as a percentage of bits transmitted rather than time period,
correct? The text seems to imply per time period in some way, but I'm pretty
certain it's actually per bit recieved in this case?

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question --

The format of the Radio Biterror Rate Data Item is ...
The format of the Radio SNR Data Item is ...
The format of the Radio Signal Strength Data Item is ...
The format of the Radio Noise Data Item is ...

Do these need length fields? It doesn't seem to adding any information?