Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-tlv-naming-01
review-ietf-manet-tlv-naming-01-opsdir-lc-chown-2015-05-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-tlv-naming
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-05-12
Requested 2015-04-19
Authors Christopher Dearlove , Thomas H. Clausen
I-D last updated 2015-05-15
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Chown
State Completed
Review review-ietf-manet-tlv-naming-01-opsdir-lc-chown-2015-05-15
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready
Completed 2015-05-15
review-ietf-manet-tlv-naming-01-opsdir-lc-chown-2015-05-15-00
Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These 
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the 
IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews 
during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments 
just like any other last call comments. 

In my view, the draft is Ready.

This seems a well-presented update. 

The one small suggestion I would make is to consider abbreviating the abstract.

Tim