Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-tlv-naming-01
review-ietf-manet-tlv-naming-01-secdir-lc-emery-2015-05-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-tlv-naming
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2015-05-12
Requested 2015-04-23
Authors Christopher Dearlove , Thomas H. Clausen
I-D last updated 2015-05-15
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Shawn M Emery
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-manet-tlv-naming by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 05)
Result Has nits
Completed 2015-05-15
review-ietf-manet-tlv-naming-01-secdir-lc-emery-2015-05-15-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

The draft provides nomenclature of types and type extensions used by Mobile Ad hoc Networking's
(MANET) Packet, Message, and Address Blocks.  The draft also specifies a corresponding IANA
registry for these types.

The security considerations section does exist and discloses that the draft does not impose
any security considerations in itself.  I agree with this assertion.

General comments:

None.

Editorial comments:

s/consisteng/consistent/

Shawn.
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