Early Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-07
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-07-intdir-early-winters-2023-02-28-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
| Deadline | 2023-02-25 | |
| Requested | 2023-02-08 | |
| Requested by | Éric Vyncke | |
| Authors | Tommy Pauly , David Schinazi , Alex Chernyakhovsky , Mirja Kühlewind , Magnus Westerlund | |
| I-D last updated | 2023-02-28 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -07
by Timothy Winters
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Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by R. (Miek) Gieben Genart Last Call review of -08 by Vijay K. Gurbani Artart Last Call review of -08 by Jean Mahoney Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar |
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| Comments |
This document is basically an IP tunnel over QUIC ;-) Cool stuff, but a intdir review with a specific view on tunnels (including QoS & fragmentation) is probably required during the MASQUE WGLC. Thanks |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Timothy Winters |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-07-intdir-early-winters-2023-02-28
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/2vUBVf7tvu3uE0rNjF6LpXegNyo | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2023-02-28 |
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-07-intdir-early-winters-2023-02-28-00
I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. Based on my review this document is ready for publication. I was grateful to see the document handle IPv6 MTU in a reasonable fashion. My only NIT with this document was I would clarify Section 7 ICMP error messages are outside the tunnel to other IP proxies. Other ICMP Error messages not from the IP Proxy stay inside the tunnel.