Last Call Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2023-03-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-03-15
Requested 2023-03-01
Authors Tommy Pauly , David Schinazi , Alex Chernyakhovsky , Mirja Kühlewind , Magnus Westerlund
I-D last updated 2023-03-03
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -07 by Timothy Winters (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by R. (Miek) Gieben
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Vijay K. Gurbani
Artart Last Call review of -08 by Jean Mahoney
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Review review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2023-03-03
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/xDzbLIml2cnNcLA_g6Sj8YPuQiQ
Reviewed revision 08
Result Ready
Completed 2023-03-03
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2023-03-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2023-03-03
IETF LC End Date: 2023-03-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The I-D is ready for moving ahead as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 1

Nits/editorial comments: 0

Minor Issue:
- The I-D alternates between MUST and SHALL, sometimes using both in the same
sentence or paragraph.  Between MUST and SHALL, my advise is to be consistent
and pick one.  All things being equal, MUST is preferable since a neophyte
reader of the I-D, not well versed in IETF ways, can easily understand the
authority behind MUST.