Last Call Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2023-03-03 IETF LC End Date: 2023-03-15 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The I-D is ready for moving ahead as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 1 Nits/editorial comments: 0 Minor Issue: - The I-D alternates between MUST and SHALL, sometimes using both in the same sentence or paragraph. Between MUST and SHALL, my advise is to be consistent and pick one. All things being equal, MUST is preferable since a neophyte reader of the I-D, not well versed in IETF ways, can easily understand the authority behind MUST.