Early Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp-listen-10
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Request Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp-listen-08
Requested revision 08 (document currently at 15)
Type Early Review
Team HTTP Directorate (httpdir)
Deadline 2025-10-28
Requested 2025-10-14
Requested by Dennis Jackson
Authors David Schinazi , Abhijit Singh
I-D last updated 2026-08-06 (Latest revision 2026-08-06)
Completed reviews Httpdir Early review of -10 by Mark Nottingham (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -12 by Aihua Guo (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -12 by Yaroslav Rosomakho (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Ines Robles (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Jasdip Singh (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -13 by Yaroslav Rosomakho (diff)
Comments 
Context: This document has been through WGLC and we anticipate sending it to the IESG shortly after IETF 124.
Assignment Reviewer Mark Nottingham
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp-listen by HTTP Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2025-10-19
review-ietf-masque-connect-udp-listen-10-httpdir-early-nottingham-2025-10-19-00
Nits:

* Introduction: "Combined with the HTTP CONNECT method (see Section 9.3.6 of
[HTTP]), it allows proxying the majority of a Web Browser's HTTP traffic." This
is slightly confusing to readers who aren't familiar with context; suggest:
"... allows proxying HTTP/1 and HTTP/2 (which are TCP-based) and HTTP/3 (which
is UDP-based).

* Throughout, 'header' should be 'header field'