Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mboned-driad-amt-discovery-09
review-ietf-mboned-driad-amt-discovery-09-rtgdir-lc-pignataro-2019-12-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mboned-driad-amt-discovery
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2019-12-18
Requested 2019-11-18
Requested by Alvaro Retana
Authors Jake Holland
I-D last updated 2020-07-18 (Latest revision 2019-12-20)
Completed reviews Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Niclas Comstedt (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Daniel Fox Franke (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Dr. Bernard D. Aboba (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-mboned-driad-amt-discovery by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/ou0xbXESJgZjTom53kc1_E36bus
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-12-02
review-ietf-mboned-driad-amt-discovery-09-rtgdir-lc-pignataro-2019-12-02-00
Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes
on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to
the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please
see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last
Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
discussion or by updating the draft.

Summary: Ready.

While I share some of the comments from the Ops Dir review, those are covered there.

This is a useful and well written document.

Best,

Carlos.